Keep up the great work loving this series so much
This is an excellent series. I love the model you've chosen. I think Dan needs to tell Jill he wants a turn in her body. Maybe once she swaps back with Mason, Dan can have a shot in the epilouge.
I think Mason won't give Jill back her body. He feels so comfortable and alive in that skin lol.
This series is great! I would say maybe giving their younger son a run in the body, that would give it a completely different twist. Keep up the great work, love your work!