Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Myself And I 4

8 comments:

  1. I would also miss all that sensations if I was Martin and had been Erica.
    What would Martin do next?

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  2. good story, great touch at the end where hisown body feel foregin to him

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  3. I also enjoyed this series and agree with the comments. If this were to continue, I think it might be interesting to explore:
    1. More times he takes over her body.
    2. Martin letting her in on what is happening and she copying herself into him to see what he feels.
    3. Erica-Martin still actually exists without the headphones and is just pretending to be Erica.
    4. He finds a way to make the copy permanent on purpose.

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  4. Nice ending. I love the fact that he didn't get away with it without paying some kind of price. Well done.

    IS
    Zapper

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  5. Such a neat steady transformation! More pleaseee :D ~DAGS

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  6. Please!
    Continue this story!

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