Really cool story! I like how Zoey and Marty's relationship is sort of growing. They both are good characters! I cant wait for the next part :D
Ha! I bet he is regretting it in the morning. ISZapper
Who is the woman on the top? For research purposes.
this story has really inspired you! Pretty funny the kid in the mom's body. I'm suprised that that the new Zoey didn't take some money with her or maybe her ATM card.