WOW! superbly written, Great discriptions of souls flying around. Grandad sure likes that body!
Nice! I love the action scene . . . all the souls bouncing around the room, looking for a body. I like the fact that they could see it! I can't wait for the next part of the story. CheersZapper
Thanks everyone! I had a hard time trying to decide how to do the swap so I made it easy on myself and pulled a "Scooby Doo movie" swap lol
Her son "Donnie" in Collen?? Hold on... I thought....Tom was Collen...
Nope, Colleen is in Tom