very good story, nice dialog
Hot body, but I wonder how many years he's giving up. I'm surprised he didn't try to cut a deal with Dawn or Zoe. Since they're both girls and probably close to his age. Or at least Alyson. She might be older but you made her sound totally hot. lol CheersZapper
very good story, nice dialog
ReplyDeleteHot body, but I wonder how many years he's giving up. I'm surprised he didn't try to cut a deal with Dawn or Zoe. Since they're both girls and probably close to his age. Or at least Alyson. She might be older but you made her sound totally hot. lol
ReplyDeleteCheers
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