It's always disappointing when you see the second part of these AP stories and you realize that the "14 years old" in part 1 was supposed to be a hot babe in her own right all along.Maybe if you used a real younger girl the swap would be more impactful? Love these anyway, just a friendly recommendation.
I'd love to see another one where they try to use the totem and it backfires . . . lolCheersZapper
charming & funny