Excellent story, good feel for fantasy. also funny,OUCH! veyr originalone small criticism , a man in that kind of armor would be riding. No way he he walked very far!
Yeah I should have mentioned that his horse was injured and had to carry on by foot. lol
Interesting curse. There are a lot of ways that could be used.
Excellent story, good feel for fantasy. also funny,OUCH! veyr original
ReplyDeleteone small criticism , a man in that kind of armor would be riding. No way he he walked very far!
Yeah I should have mentioned that his horse was injured and had to carry on by foot. lol
DeleteInteresting curse. There are a lot of ways that could be used.
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