Sunday, April 10, 2016

Testing Her Machine



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  1. This sounds pretty good. I know I've said this a dozen times about some of your caps but could this be extended? This has hints of cliffhangers.

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  2. sexy & funny. I wonder what goes wrong?

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  3. This sounds like an amazing opening to a series/mini series. *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*

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  4. lol - I love that line, "Best weekend ever!" It sounds great, but I'm with Eric, something is going to go wrong . . .

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    Zapper

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  5. Maybe she's testing out the machine, then using it to trade places with her best friend who's life she envies...

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  6. Once he finds the cache of toys she has under her bed, the mind-swapping device isn't the only machine he'll be testing

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  7. Bye thw way if you liked this story, morpheus on Fictionmania has a great story called 'Neighbor 2' with a almost identical plot.

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    1. Yep! That where I kinda got the idea. Morpheus is one of my favorite writers :)

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