I like this one! Perhaps a continuation with a time lapse? Very cool cap!
LOL OUCH!
The real question is whether or not he goes on that date?
Nice bit of writing, you can feel the pre-teen awkwardness in the dialog. ISZapper
I like this one! Perhaps a continuation with a time lapse? Very cool cap!
ReplyDeleteLOL OUCH!
ReplyDeleteThe real question is whether or not he goes on that date?
ReplyDeleteNice bit of writing, you can feel the pre-teen awkwardness in the dialog.
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